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四步把握G類書信語氣(上) - 教學補習


 

書信是G類小作文的唯一形式,但根據其內容可以分為多種類別:如投訴信、詢問信、求職信、友情信、道歉信、建議信、邀請信、感謝信等。要寫好英文書信,使用哪種語氣十分重要,這可以準確地反映出寫信人和收信人之間的關系。總的來說,相對正式的信件要給人一種謙恭有禮、積極合作的態度,不那么正式的信件如友情信之類應以友好自然的措辭拉近彼此的距離。

由于G類考生相對于A類考生人數較少,考生對于書信寫作的重視不夠,在G類分數要求日漸水漲船高的今天,考生尤其要注意書信寫作中極為重要的一點,就是語氣的把握。本文中,專家將從四個方面對于如何選擇合適的語氣和措辭進行說明。

一、審題把握

把握好G類書信語氣的第一步,就是要弄清寫信的要求和背景。雅思書信寫作題目就是由背景信息和寫作任務兩個部分構成的,我們可以將其分成私人信件和事務性信件兩種類型。寫給親朋好友的信可以歸為前者,如友情信,請看下面這個例子:

09.01.15

You are going to have a business trip and arrange your friend to look after your children. Write a letter to the friend. You should:

1. Tell him/her which kind of food your children like and dislike

2. Tell him/her which kinds of activities your children can attend

3. Tell him/her the time you will pick up your children.

根據背景分析,這封書信是寫給朋友請求幫助在自己出差期間照管孩子的,顯而易見,這是一封私人信件,由于對方是摯友,寫信的語氣可以比較輕松和隨意,在說明詳細內容時,措辭不必講究但要禮貌。

再來看一個例子:

09.02.07

Your friends have been out on holiday and ask you to stay at their house. However, there is a problem with a piece of equipment in the kitchen. Write a letter to them. In your letter, you should:

1. Describe your feeling at their home

2. Describe what the problem is

3. Describe what action you have done to solve the problem

這是一封抱怨信,寫信人在朋友度假期間幫朋友看管房屋,在信中向朋友說明廚房用具的問題,這并非商務場合和正式交涉,切不可義正詞嚴。

09.09.05

You are living in an English-speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise everyday. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. In your letter, you should

1. say how you are disturbed by noise

2. give some suggestions to fix the problem

3. tell the owner further action will be taken if this problem remains unsolved.

這封信同屬抱怨信,我們來比較一下它與上一封信的區別,這封信是寫給餐館經理的,說明對于餐館噪聲的不滿,收信人與寫信人并不熟悉甚至從未謀面,過于熟絡的語氣和措辭,或者在朋友之間使用的抱怨性較強的詞匯都應盡量避免。

將常見的書信分為以下幾類:詢問信、建議信和求職信一般較為正式;友情信屬于非正式信件;投訴信、道歉信、邀請信、感謝信的語氣要根據具體情況而定。考生需要注意題目所描述的背景和對收信人的設定,分清寫信對象,準確而恰當地把握題目要求,走好G類書信第一步。

二、信頭稱呼

所謂稱呼是指寫信人對收信人的稱呼用語,一般用“dear”開頭,在稱呼后可以用逗號或是冒號“美式”。

1. 如果是寫給親戚或是關系密切的朋友,我們習慣于在“Dear”后加上對其的稱呼或是名字。如:Dear mother或者是Dear Emma;

2. 如果是寫給一家公司或者不知道具體職銜的人,可以用Dear Sir or Madam或To Whom It May Concern;

3. 如果知道具體職銜但不知其姓氏,可以以其職位稱呼,如Dear Chief Accountant;

4. 如果寫信人知道收信人的姓名和性別,但關系不夠密切,只屬于一般往來,Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms/Miss Wang會顯得友好卻不隨便;

5. 另外,也可以用學位及職稱加上姓氏或者全名,如Dear Dr. Will Smith, Dear Prof. Jane Austin。

三、語氣斟酌

正文作為整個信件內容最重要的部分,所選用的詞匯和句式無不體現著寫信人的態度和語氣,應該根據不同的信件內容進行挑選和斟酌。

1)投訴信

投訴信的收信對象可以是比較熟悉的人,如抱怨鄰居寵物過于吵鬧,也可以是針對公司甚至不熟悉的機構或者某個事件而寫的,如對社區體育設施的拆除表達不滿。

You heard that a sports center would be closed. Write a letter to the manager. In this letter, you should:

1. Tell how you heard about the news.

2. Say what your opinion is about it.

3. Explain how it impacts your life.

由于對象是某運動中心經理,措辭方面就應該較為禮貌,以下的詞句是可以選取作為陳述問題的句型:

I am writing to you to complain about...

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...

There are some problems with … that I wish to bring to attention.

值得注意的是,也完全沒有必要像公文那么正式,只要言語恰當就可以。在敘述問題時可以多以客觀性描述為主,輔以主觀的感受,顯得更有說服力,如:

I found …

I feel quite disappointed that…

在結尾部分說明期望時,也可以搭配同樣的語氣:

I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.

I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing, better service to the public.

We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.

如果是針對鄰居再三出現的已經提醒過很多次的問題,我們可以措辭更為非正式一些,如I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 但也不意味著可以出現“guy”等過于口語風格化的語句。

2)工作申請信

G類考生許多都是有工作經驗的人,或者曾經有過寫工作申請的經歷,由于收信人多是公司或者經理級的人,言辭之間應該以正式語氣為主:

I wish to apply for the position of…which you advertised in…

I am very interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining a position as … with your company.

結尾部分在闡述希望約見進行面試時,也選取一些較為緩和語氣的動詞如“hope”來表達:

I am available for an interview every afternoon. Please contact me at…

I hope that after reviewing my enclosed resume you will kindly give me an interview so that I can elaborate on my studies and working experience.

I hope you would consider my application favorably and grant me an interview.

 


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